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It looks nice from the screenshots but I think you could add a lot more detail. Right now it could pass for a HL1 map, albeit with nicer textures. For example those yellow pipes. Don't just join them at right angles like that; pipes curve. If you can find a model to use for those pipes, that's even better. Also when you have a pipe going through a wall, there should be some kind of collar or evidence of a hole in the wall. And there should be some structure there to support the pipes as they are probably not strong enough to hold themselves up.
That's just an example and if you look around you can probably find lots of places to add trim and architectural features to make the map more interesting and believable.
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